利弊类先区分“讨论优缺点”和“优点是否大于缺点”。后者还要求比较和判断。优点写两条、缺点写一条,并不能证明优点更重要。
比较时用什么标准
先确定谁受影响,再比较影响的程度、持续时间或是否容易缓解。比如远程办公节约通勤时间,但沟通成本可能因工作类型不同而变化,不能把所有岗位一概而论。
段落怎样避免清单式写法
选一个主要影响展开:说明变化如何发生,再解释结果。结尾的取舍应能回到正文的比较标准,而不是突然加一条没有解释过的优点。
示范题
More employees now work from home for part of the week. Do the advantages of this arrangement outweigh its disadvantages?
示范段落
Working from home can give employees more control over their daily schedule. Removing a long commute leaves time for rest or family responsibilities before work begins. This benefit is particularly relevant to people who live far from their workplace. However, its value depends on whether they have a suitable place to work and can communicate effectively with colleagues.
怎样检查这一段
先遮住示范段落,用自己的话解释每句话的作用。再换一个细节重写,检查判断和依据是否仍然对应。不要只替换同义词;如果意思变了,要同时改理由。
接着练习
用 Task 2 结构检查 看段落与字数。